You do a nice job of sequencing the beginning and that's what I was talking about in your script. You needed to separate the shots like you did. Your script didn't do that though so I'm glad you understand what I want you to do. Again though, I have to ask what makes Herenui a pest? She doesn't do much to the others to really bug them. She may have a poor attitude about the test but how does she really bug them while they are taking the test? That is the part that is the weakest here. I don't feel your message is quite getting across like it should.
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.