This is a very superficial story. It hits on some points well, but only at the top level. It doesn't dig deep enough to tell me the whole story behind this 100 year old business. You have just one sound bite for your first point. Yes, it was started because of the great grandfather being asked, but that's all you say about it. Was it always in this location? How big was it when they started? Did they serve more than just breakfast? When did they add the hotel rooms to the business? I want more info about their history. This is 100 years old after all. What about their employees make them successful? What are the traits of their employees? Are there any examples of what they are talking about? I need you to go deeper. Are they extremely loyal? Hardworking? You mentioned the good food. Like what? There are no examples. Are there any special dishes only found here? Do they make something really well? The biggest struggle was the hurricane yet you mention nothing about what the hurricane did to them other than cause 1 million in damages. Did they close? Did they have to rebuild? What was such a struggle? Again, you haven't gone deep enough. Even your last point about how they plan to stay around. You tell me nothing. You need to go deeper to make this story work, otherwise this is nothing special, and a 100 year old business is really something special.
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.